this semester i take a new class named psychology. i haven't learned about it so far, and all i feel interesting in it. the first class, the teacher gave us a movie that talk about relationship of friends and lovers. the movie consists very much things, and i have so much stirring of emotion. who is our friend in our all life?and who will stay with me all the time?will the best friend stay in touch forever?everything can't be ascertain, right?
i like the course because it let me think so much, and i will have my own idea when i want to talk about it. the class won't put too much pressure on me, so i like the class, and i like the teacher, too.
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Hi Erica,
I notice a number of problems, but the first thing is that you don't start your sentences with a capital letter all the time. . .and even "I" is a small letter. This is homework, remember, and you should use a bit better English than that. I assume you know better, at least. :-)
Check spelling and grammar before posting, please.
Chris O'Brien
Erica, you have only posted on two different days, both rather long ago. You should have at least 15 posts by now. Just that is plenty of reason to give you a failing grade for this time. However, your writing, though brief, is full of errors, which should not be written by an English major. Please seriously think about this, and decide either to correct this problem or what else you could major in besides English. If you would just read a little English every day you would improve quickly. I'll rewrite this post for you so you can see all the problems. Please ask me if you can't understand. I can't do this to all your posts, but you should be able to fix them. I'll put the rewrite into the next comment.
This semester, I am taking a new class in psychology. I have never learned about this before, and I feel interested in it. During the first class session, the teacher showed us a movie about the relationships between friends and lovers. The movie was complex, and its many topics and situations stirred strong emotions in me. Who are our lifelong friends; who will stay with me for all time; will my best friends stay in touch with me forever? There doesn't seem to be any way to ascertain any answer we might give to such questions.
I enjoy this course because it makes me think so much, and because it makes me want to discuss my ideas with others. Also, I like it because it doesn't put too much pressure on me; I the teacher for this reason, too.
You have written only 20% of the number of posts you should have written, and the English is quite broken so far, so your grade is 15% for this time. Please keep up with the writing starting this week, and check your writing before you post it, to avoid this result next time.
Chris
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